Jazmin

Persuasion work - Summer Summer is the coolest season… because yo get to take dogs on walks. Also you can go to the beach for a swim. And going to Queenstown. Its lot’s of FUN.

Every body knows that taking dogs for walks is good exercise. Going around to the neighbour and asking to walk their dogs. But only if they have nice little dogs. You get to play with them. And you can bring friends with you to.

This clearly shows that the beach is fun playing in the water with my friends and jump over the waves Then we have race down to the end of the beach

Only a fool wouldn’t want to go to Queenstown I have so much fun I always go on walks with my Nana and Frank, her dog. We go down a special track to reach my favourite part… Swinging off a rope into a huge lake!!! And then when we get back Nana makes us burgers

media type="custom" key="5048821" Hydro-Slide At Moana Pool there are some wonderful water slides. It’s the weekend and here I was standing right in front of the fast one. It looked like a deep dark dangerous black hole. I didn’t want to get in but strangely at the same time I wanted to. I stood back and watched as kids my age jumped in and suddenly vanished. It was that part that made it look scary. What if I jumped in and never returned. I would never see my mum or dad again. I was so freaked out but I only had one choice and that was to jump in… Significant time had past and I knew if I stood here forever it wouldn’t last. Taking a deep breathe I inch forward. I climbed in and fell.. It felt like I had just been flushed down toilet! My fears were confirmed!! I swirled around and turned upside down and bumped into the sides. Then I suddenly fell into this big soft gentle pool. I’M ALIVE! There wasn’t many people there but I knew I had reached the bottom and when I looked back it didn’t seem so scary anymore.

Jazmin