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During the year we will be writing and publishing our work. As part of web2 we will be working with Room 12 giving feedback to our shared work. Click on each class members name and read what they have written. As part of Web 2 we will be posting work that is not fully edited and are asking for feedback from you the reader on what we need to change/improve or alter. Thank you for your time and feedback.

Room 13

Ray Huber's advice to writers:

Three tricks to start a story: Think of favourite animals then write as if you were the animal.
 * 1) A list of random words
 * 2) First sentence introducing person, place and problem e.g. "Where is Papa going with the axe?"
 * 3) A character saying something e.g. "Get out! This is my alley."

We have taken on his advice and see if you can see this in our writing.

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